First Draft of Final Double Page Spread:

Analysis: I think I need to do more with the main images. - I like the idea of there being two Scotts, but maybe I could do something more exciting with them... Or maybe just one big Scott.

I also need to organise my article into columns. I will do this by using Publisher, then make the layout and the images perfect in Photoshop.

As well,I need an enlarged first letter for the beginning of the article and possibly a pull quote to wrap the main body of the article around it on the first pages of the DPS and then I can get rid of the second page of text as it is not needed.

First Draft of Final Contents Page:

Analysis: The text looks a bit boring, I can maybe change the colour of the numbers of the pages to make it more appealing to the eye.

The images on the side look slightly odd because only the pictures of TTOC have an outline, where as the tennents dont so it looks less professional. However, the image of Scott looks good as it is.

Also, the blue text is quite hard to read on the top of the pictures so maybe I could outline it in black and it goes well with the house style and will match 'CONTENTS'.

Another thing I could maybe add is the date so that the reader knows what month it is for.

First Draft of Final Front Cover:

Analysis: I could try and make the 'Scott Davies' coverline fit into the palm of his hand to make the most of my cool image. I will cut him out of the background and add a plain white so the image jumps out. I will give my masthead a bit more oomph by adding a layer style.

I might also add a graphic behind the FREE TTOC CD and I may also consider enlarging you main image so that it fills the page a bit better.

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