Draft Num3 - Before and After (with annotations):

Magazine Draft Before:

The magazine looks as if it is missing something because it is quite bare around the top because there is not pictures or text there. Because of this it looks quite plain and boring. The masthead is eye catching however the front cover as a whole is not. To improve this i will either add pictures or text, or maybe both.


Magazine Draft After:

I added some eye catching text to the front cover informing people of what is inside the magazine. This way people will know what to expect and may want to read the magazine more cause they know what it offers. This also makes the front cover look better because it makes it look less boring.