Draft Num4 - Before and After (with annotations):

Magazine Draft Before:

This is quite plain and looks like a traditional college magazine. The text is plain and boring and the title needs to be bigger, bolder and more noticeable. The text saying 'What Wyke has to offer to students like you!' is also lost in the picture and needs to stand out more.

Magazine Draft After:



The masthead is bigger and more attention grabbing because I changed the size and font. I also made the text of what wyke can offer bigger and bolder so that people would notice it and it is now easier to read too. Because the texts have been changed and they stand out a lot more the magazine looks less plain and boring.