Positioning of Text: The sub-heading for the article is at the top and then the information about it is at the bottom. they should be together, so I will move them so the they look better and more like a professional college magazine. also where the white text is situated it is quite hard to read so it may need moving or outlining to make it readable.
Magazine Draft After:
I have moved the white text slightly so that it is readable and i moved the 'Daniel & Connor' text so that it looks better and more professional.
-This magazine is quite plain however I think it works quite well because it shows the main story and is eye catching, and all the other information and stories can be put on the ontents page.
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